I want a review of my blog

hello

my blog is

[url]http://artaviush.blogspot.com[/url]

please feel free to leave comments and feedbacks

checked out your blog and left comment. Will check out later for updates

Hi There,

Just had a look at your site. Apart from the copious amounts of adverts on your site, the main thing that stuck out was the site began with advenrts and went straight into posts. I would definately recomment a short catch and descriptive heading or some sort to separate the adverts from the post content.

Hope this was helpful

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The background page made me a bit woosy... And the adverts dont work, says page cannot be displayed. Ad placement has to be reviewed and changed.