Review my new blog site..

I have this newly made blog site. Please review it. I made it just now..

onlinebizdollar.blogspot.com

Wow... blog about online bussiness. Nice.

I have to say that the highlighted dollar amounts are a great eye catcher, but from there I have absolutely no idea what you're talking about. You should definitely include some kind of brief summary about what these companies are, what you're doing and why you're making money off of it. My natural instinct anytime I see money and business is to run away because it's some kind of 'get rich quick' scheme or scam. If you want people to trust you, you'll have to give them some key information up front. Like "Doesn't require any investment" or "I've been making money by doing ___________________. It's pretty simple and this blog is about showing you how to repeat my success and start generating your own income bit by bit."

Because of your topic, which is a very competitive industry, you'll have to work extra hard to keep their attention and earn their trust. Start thinking about how you can fit as much information in as small a space as possible. Summarize, summarize, summarize. And make sure they know what your blog is about no matter where they look. More than just "making money" describe how it works, but make it brief.

Also, you should really allow comments. People will want to interact with you and ask questions like "How long did it take you to earn that, and how does it work?"

nice site...but you might want to carefully arrange the layout, it's kinda messy..Goodluck on blogging..

Looks kinda sloppy.