It's All Great Until.... - New Blog on the block

Hi Everyone! Ive just started a new blog! https://itsallgreatuntil.wordpress.com/

My first post is out! I would love it if you gave it a read and gave me some feedback or a follow! Im looking for some new stuff to follow too so Ill be sure to follow back!
I would really love some feedback on my style of writing! So let me know what you think and where you think I could improve.

My first post link is below:
https://itsallgreatuntil.wordpress.com/2018/05/13/the-r-word/